ESSAY FOR DISCUSSING ,1 TOPIC FOR EACH 2 WEEKS

[kaiser]

hi everybody
I hope all of you join this new topic enthusiastically
If each of you share your own idea for this topic,that'll make a perfect essay.I find it useful for your essay at school
First topic for this week is :
* Some body like to live in the city. Others like country life. Which one do you like ???

[huda]

I think that living in the city or living in the country all has advantages and disadvantages.
Living in the city, you have many chances to get good job with high salary, you can study abroad easily. In addition, you will have good entertainment such as theater, cinema,ect. To live in the city, you can widden your knowledge with technology and science. However, you don't have fresh air and always stand pollution.
Living in the country side, you can breath fesh air. It' s good for your health! You can also see sunset in the evening.

But I like to have country life. :cowboy:

[hieuducco]

My question is who's going to correct these? I think there will be lots, lots of mistakes, and errors.

[grdoor]

Okie ! Let me correct.

- Living in cities has their own benefits but also has lots of disadvantages as well.

>>> Living in cities has their own benefits but also lots of disadvantages as well.

- Cities are where the industry have grown.

>>> Cities are where the industry has grown.

-At the conclusion, I think that living in cities, or countries, have their own disadvantages so where people want to live, it's depends on them. Me, I have no idea about living in cities nor countries.
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Well that my own opinion. I have a balanced view and I mostly wrote about disadvantages of both place of living. It's seem that I'm not an interesting pupil

>>>At the conclusion, I think that living in cities, or countries, have their own disadvantages so where people want to live, it depends on them. Me, I have no idea about living in cities nor countries.
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Well that my own opinion. I have a balanced view and I mostly wrote about disadvantages of both place of living. It seems that I'm not an interesting pupil

Is it right ? :D

[hechang]

LOL ! Just coz u told me to correct ur essay .and i didnt think the last sentence was in ur essay . :D

[kaiser]

P.S.:
i don't think people use "pupil" as "student" in their daily conversation anymore. I find it really funny when middle school, high school and even college kids just keep calling themselves "pupils". That word is more widely understood as the black area in your eye, in the middle of the iris. I only see that word as "student" in old movies and old text books.

[keithng]

I agree that "pupil" is an old fashion ( border= ; however, I like to use this world :-B . I don't know why but I think that I was trained to use that world since I was 10 :(.
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About my mistakes....absolutely nothing to say :((:((:((:((:((:((. I think that I've said that I'm not very good at English, especially writting. I just have confident on my speaking and listenning :D